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| C. 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this. I especially like how you rhymed lines 9 and 12, and how you painted everything so prettily then took the life out of them and turned them into, well, meaningless things. I'm amazed this has no reviews--this certainly is one of the best poems I've read on this site. Love from. |