This is really good so far! Update soon! :)

Great story. I just have 1 problem with it...I was thinking of doing a Sci-Fi with Elves and Dwarves and the others. You beat me to it. I've been thinking of this for a week now. Great story, I'm just mad you beat me. lol

Kool! But might I recomend that if you want more hits and reviews to your story, you should post chapters at least a day apart intead of all at once.