Last line was confusing to me. Didn't seem to fit, I guess. Didn't flow off of the second to last as well as the rest of the poem did. Love it though,
Don't let me drown/I want to dance
Thats very interesting, right there, a little abstract when read that way.
Your poems might have more meaning if you broke them into stanzas. You can do it through the story editor, it's just a boring drawn out task.

Hey! I like it- fave line- 'the lights will blind and fight my vision'. Dang it, I miss Downtown T__T