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| empathic life 2008-07-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow... Nice twist, presenting such a dark topic in such a light tone, and with the bubble imagery... Very... contradictory? Yes. We'll take that. I like the direction your poetry is going these days... Longer and more intricate, rather darker and exploring unknown territories... Very intriguing ideas and images. Sorry I didn't get around to reviewing this one earlier. The alert got buried in my inbox, and I just found it the other day. |
| The Un-great-ful 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, I thought it was my job to mong your mind up, little Baxterial Baxterama. What the hell is this all about? You totally confused me, even as I read it a second time. I think you've eaten a little too many maryland cookies. And holy sh1t! Are you 16 now? Oh, Baxtrocular one, you are becoming a woman! Ange |
| painting andromeda 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI like how this poem is somewhat hazy, a happy-medium between reality and dreams. I like the last line as well, it wraps up the poem in a way that's open to interpretation. This poem was refreshing to read, it was fresh and new. Great job with this. Stephen |
| WyrdWolf 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseThis had an air of sadness hanging over it, but I'm sure that's what it's for. I loved the use of 'pop!'. It just seemed perfect; disrupting, and very fitting near the end. Wolfie |
| Dice Darwin 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Pretty darn good, Mizz Felicia-Chick. You're not half horrible. You might even be (gasp) better than me? Catch you later, mentor lady. |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseInteresting progression and thought process. I like how this continues with the main thematic element through until the end. Well written. MD:77. |
| wildwolffree17 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseLovely. |