Wow... Nice twist, presenting such a dark topic in such a light tone, and with the bubble imagery... Very... contradictory? Yes. We'll take that. I like the direction your poetry is going these days... Longer and more intricate, rather darker and exploring unknown territories... Very intriguing ideas and images.

Sorry I didn't get around to reviewing this one earlier. The alert got buried in my inbox, and I just found it the other day.

Whoa, I thought it was my job to mong your mind up, little Baxterial Baxterama.

What the hell is this all about? You totally confused me, even as I read it a second time. I think you've eaten a little too many maryland cookies.

And holy sh1t! Are you 16 now? Oh, Baxtrocular one, you are becoming a woman!

Ange

I like how this poem is somewhat hazy, a happy-medium between reality and dreams. I like the last line as well, it wraps up the poem in a way that's open to interpretation. This poem was refreshing to read, it was fresh and new. Great job with this.

Stephen

This had an air of sadness hanging over it, but I'm sure that's what it's for. I loved the use of 'pop!'. It just seemed perfect; disrupting, and very fitting near the end.

Wolfie

I like this. Pretty darn good, Mizz Felicia-Chick. You're not half horrible. You might even be (gasp) better than me?

Catch you later, mentor lady.

Interesting progression and thought process. I like how this continues with the main thematic element through until the end. Well written. MD:77.

Lovely.