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bleeding Kansas
gentle speaker
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
The civil war was anything but civil. I like your use of imagery, Very well written.
Keep it up
Adenil
2008-03-17 . chapter 1
You've got a bit of red on you.
Go Kansas! You rock!
This line: It bled all over me/the red all over me
I really liked, not exactly sure why, but the mental image was sharp and very vivid.
BlackFeatherLintu
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
i loove the haltingness or whatever of this one! :D funny... we were talking about the Civil War today...
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