Reviews for Just Streak Your Makeup Around Your Eyes

Elizabeth D-hopeless romant... 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abusedeterioration of a person's potential my **!
.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseThis one's just as interesting as the other one. It really makes me want to know more. The words don't make sense to me because I have no idea where they're coming from and there's absolutely not explanation for them, but it really gets me interested in the poem. I loved them! Great work. -stix-
kloun doll 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseI can't help but to think you want to keep that person forever but that person is leaving and you can't do nothing, and it's something like a nightmare and you just wake up. it's a nice poem, heartbroken.
misery sister 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is why poems are so amazing. SO few words, yet so many emotions. Good job. :)
freaky.little.devil 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseThat's sweet. ("i just want to keep you...")
simpleplan13 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseI like the format... it's really interesting and you have some really powerful word choices in this like desensitizing, jolt, and horrific relenting... that was really awesome. I especially loved the line about on their skin. One thing the "clear" it confused me... I couldn't figure out what you meant. Anyhow other than that it was a really great piece