One thing I kept thinking as I read this was that the lines should be longer. Just because I read them like that, if that makes sense. A lot of your lines feel cut in half for no real reason. For example, the first two lines could easily be one. Ditto for L4&5, 7&8, L10&11 and 12&13.

Otherwise, I liked the open ended nature of your final line. It's a good thing, to be questioning all the issues and really wondering if any one person can achieve each of the promises they make.

Kudos.

Midnight