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null.account. 2009-03-28 . chapter 1
I love this. The picture you create with this is awesome. Greeaat description of ana.
shutitoff 2008-04-07 . chapter 1
Oh wow. I thought I'd just take a look at your stuff - and I am glad that I did!

The inspiration is clear here but you've found a way to make it original and even slightly abstract. Perhaps the title Ana is too obvious? Perhaps not. In any case, I like how you have described her spine. Chilling. I also liked how you used words like pretty, lucky, content and pride to show her skewed view of the world.
metatextual 2008-03-31 . chapter 1
the imagery is very cold and mechanical, i like it
W. Griffin 2008-03-17 . chapter 1
eww! creepy!

but amazingly good... hmm...

-w. griffin
citrus traffic 2008-03-16 . chapter 1
oh my god, this is amazing. the imagery is breathtaking. welcome to my favorites.
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