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Reviews For: Markus

-RomanticallyCliched- 2008-10-06 ch 1,	abuseare you gonna end it here? seems incomplete. ;]
liz 2008-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abusenot gonna lie i really loved these shots. i think you should turn it into a full on story, but that might be because i have a thing for doomed relatiinships trying to make it work. the charactors are brilliant and my fave is the best friend. anyway just sharing the praise this wasnt really any help to you as a writer except as an ego boost. well watever i still love it.
M 2008-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abusei've really enjoyed the 2 one-shots. i hope you turn it into a full out story though.
Ninavs 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseWow! This couple is hott!
SIMPLY oDd 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI love this couple! They're so cute together not just when they're in bed, but as a couple in general. I think it's hilarious that you have this woman who many claimed was too aggressive and then a real man like markus comes alongand nowshe's this meek little submissive thing and it's not bad. I like the fact that he's in control, he's not hurting her and if you look at it she's actually kindain charge because he's set on pleasing her! lol
kristenn987 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abusei loved this and the first part from natalia's point of view. if you get anymore ideas, you should definitely think of adding a little more. i love your writing.
Miss Maebelline 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely adore this and the first part. The thing I love most is how realistic and complex your characters are. I love Natalia and Mark together, not just during their intimate moments, but when their just talking or looking at each other. There is so much you could do with this story, and I wished I could convince you to continue this, maybe write a short novel... I keep wondering what would happen if her friend found out, or the company, how Mark really feels (After reading this, I'm beginning to feel that he wants a little more than just sex), and Natalia, how she deals with working with him.. AUGH! Please write more!
rainingontheinside 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseI think you should continue and make it an entire story... or continue Natalia. Either way I like it and I think it would be a great story to continue.
sarah anne 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh no not the end!! This is charming. It's cute and sweet without being sickening or sending anyone into sugar shock. Sexy but not gratuitously. The sex was dealt with very well, which is rare for fictionpress writers. There is something about the tone if this that I love, not sure how to describe it, down to earth with a little sarcasm?? Very nice. I very much hope you continue but if not it was I have enjoyed reading.
Linece 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseThey're just lovely and **' hot. I think you should write more about them and their naughty adventures. It's nice because you've a plot too and it can be nice to read how they'll deal with their relationship and their differences! I really hope you'll write more.
Tickle my Pickle 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseI liked reading from Mark's POV. I don't know in the first story he didn't seem as controlling. I don't mind a little dominance, but him ordering her around for everything was a bit much to me. I do like his persistence, but would it be too hard to ask her out to dinner. I enjoy the relationship between them, but I think the whole dominance thing should work both ways.
Zzub Yearlight 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseAmazing story!! Great POV for Markus. I just love your writing and hope to read more from you very soon. :D
NoieD 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseI'm really not into that whole dominance thing, but it's nice to read about their relationship from Markus' point of view. I'd like to see where this goes at work, too! Thanks for the new stories.

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