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| simpleplan13 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseI like the metaphor and I love the word "seraphic" really awesome choice. One thing I think you went a bit comma crazy in the piece... like after appeared, plucked it, and cherish... but other than that really nicely done |
| Williamchan87 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abusei like... "goes plants a black rose" |
| Princess-anna57 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseInteresting concept. Intriguing indeed! Please keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |