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| sew.what32 2008-06-12 ch 5,  | abusei love this story! please update soon! |
| sew.what32 2008-04-23 ch 5, anon. | abusewow! really good chapter! i hope that maggies gives adam a chance but i also hope that adam doesnt use her! i fell really bad for her dad and its sad that her mom is getting married again.. Cant wait to read more! update soon! |
| deny.me.not 2008-04-22 ch 5, | abuseI actually started tearing up! I want to slap her mom in the face for leaving such a good man like him behind! I RAWWR! Maggie's dad seems so cute though (in the way that I am not attracted to older men 20 years my senior, really). Awesome chapter, I really liked the father-daughter moment, I think family moments can be the sweetest times. But moments between Adam and Maggie can be sweet too =D Update soon. -dmn. |
| Impersonating Sugar 2008-04-22 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story. I love where you're taking it and I love your style. Very descriptive, but not suffocatingly so. Your characters are very believable and Maggie is awesome, for lack of a better word. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| centenarian 2008-04-05 ch 4, | abuseWell, another good chapter. So... Got nothing constructive to say here. Everything's good. Hope you update soon. |
| sew.what32 2008-04-01 ch 4, | abuselove this chapter too!! i really want to learn more about vivian because i dont know much about her and really i dont even know how she is related to maggie...i must have missed that somewhere... but i am really anxious to hear more so UPDATE SOON! |
| xxUnidentified14xx 2008-03-31 ch 4, | abusehehehe serves that jack right. *Sniggers* lol loved the chappie Update soon, please |
| Tied-Up Dog 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseneat. =] -- Tied-Up Dog |
| drownyouout 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abuseHmm, keep updating! Hope to find out more about Adam and Mags. |
| I Dream of Scotland 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abuseAnother great chapter and I can't wait until the next one! :) |
| deny.me.not 2008-03-30 ch 3, | abuseI like this, and I'm pretty hooked onto it already. I really wonder what Rachel is up to. I just noticed something though, in the last chapter, you mentioned that Adam played football, but in this chapter you mentioned that Adam didn't play any sports besides girls. I'm beginning to really like this though, so I look forward to your next update. -dmn. |
| TashatheGreat 2008-03-29 ch 3, | abuseI really like it. Its unique && not too cliche =] I love the bestfriends' relationship... they're like complete opposites but still bestfriends. && when she founds adam making out with that tara girl that was unexpected, so that complicated things a bit... So yah I really like it, keep up to good work, ur doing great =] |
| WildGoddess 2008-03-29 ch 3, | abuseI can't wait to read more. I absolutely love your characters...they're real and likable. Update soon! |
| sew.what32 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseyes! this chapter is so good!! Adam does sound really into himself and i hope that he learns to be less cocky.. i wonder why Rachel is wanting to be friends with Maggie all of a sudden.. you have to update soon!! i love this story!! |
| I Dream of Scotland 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseStill really enjoying your story. I like how she acts around Adam, because she is so nonchalant, but at the same time shes not like "Oh I hate him" which wouldn't make sense because she doesn't really know him...yeahh, long ramble. Anyway, please continue with this story and don't torture me by waiting a year between updates! Well, thats a little bit of an exaggeration.. |