 sew.what32 2008-09-06 . chapter 6wow you do seem busy!
good chapter!!
i enjoyed it! I wonder why Adams mom was not welcoming towards maggie.
update soon! |
 sew.what32 2008-06-12 . chapter 5i love this story!
please update soon! |
 sew.what32 2008-04-23 . chapter 5 wow! really good chapter!
i hope that maggies gives adam a chance but i also hope that adam doesnt use her!
i fell really bad for her dad and its sad that her mom is getting married again..
Cant wait to read more!
update soon! |
 deny.me.not 2008-04-22 . chapter 5I actually started tearing up! I want to slap her mom in the face for leaving such a good man like him behind! I RAWWR! Maggie's dad seems so cute though (in the way that I am not attracted to older men 20 years my senior, really). Awesome chapter, I really liked the father-daughter moment, I think family moments can be the sweetest times. But moments between Adam and Maggie can be sweet too =D
Update soon.
-dmn. |
 Impersonating Sugar 2008-04-22 . chapter 5This is a great story. I love where you're taking it and I love your style. Very descriptive, but not suffocatingly so. Your characters are very believable and Maggie is awesome, for lack of a better word. I look forward to the next chapter. |
 centenarian 2008-04-05 . chapter 4Well, another good chapter. So... Got nothing constructive to say here. Everything's good. Hope you update soon. |
 sew.what32 2008-04-01 . chapter 4love this chapter too!!
i really want to learn more about vivian because i dont know much about her and really i dont even know how she is related to maggie...i must have missed that somewhere...
but i am really anxious to hear more so
UPDATE SOON! |
 XxTheSoNotMainStreamxX 2008-03-31 . chapter 4hehehe
serves that jack right.
*Sniggers* lol loved the chappie
Update soon, please |
 Aruru 2008-03-31 . chapter 2neat. =]
-- Tied-Up Dog |
 drownyouout 2008-03-30 . chapter 4Hmm, keep updating! Hope to find out more about Adam and Mags. |
 Lady Wrye 2008-03-30 . chapter 4Another great chapter and I can't wait until the next one! :) |
 deny.me.not 2008-03-30 . chapter 3I like this, and I'm pretty hooked onto it already. I really wonder what Rachel is up to.
I just noticed something though, in the last chapter, you mentioned that Adam played football, but in this chapter you mentioned that Adam didn't play any sports besides girls.
I'm beginning to really like this though, so I look forward to your next update.
-dmn. |
 TashatheGreat 2008-03-29 . chapter 3I really like it. Its unique && not too cliche =]
I love the bestfriends' relationship... they're like complete opposites but still bestfriends.
&& when she founds adam making out with that tara girl that was unexpected, so that complicated things a bit...
So yah I really like it, keep up to good work, ur doing great =] |
 WildGoddess 2008-03-29 . chapter 3I can't wait to read more. I absolutely love your characters...they're real and likable. Update soon! |
 sew.what32 2008-03-28 . chapter 3yes! this chapter is so good!!
Adam does sound really into himself and i hope that he learns to be less cocky..
i wonder why Rachel is wanting to be friends with Maggie all of a sudden..
you have to update soon!! i love this story!! |