 fictionluvr 2008-06-20 . chapter 1When I see strangers I often wonder what their stories are too. |
 Leigh B. 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Beautiful execution of a haiku. I connect with this piece because you captured thoughts that I quietly think of when I see passers-by. |
 a silenced revolution 2008-03-18 . chapter 1I've thought that same thing. Great haiku. |
 Moondog Dozier 2008-03-17 . chapter 1Interestingly true, and thought provoking. Well written haiku. |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-17 . chapter 1O, I like this!
Especially those last two lines. I think like this sometimes, too. |