Wow, this is like really powerful. I like it a lot.

I know you don't know me but promise me you will never ever stop writing xD

I like the flow 'cause it's natural and the imagery is beautiful.

beautiful imagery.
i loved the ending especially :]

I found this poem really vague. I'm not quite sure what you're getting at. Some of the images make me think there's a promising idea underneath but I think this poem needs quite a lot more anchoring. I couldn't even really discern a theme, though all the images seem linked.

I quite liked the arrangement except that the first line seemed a bit long. The rest, though, was quite appealing. I particularly liked the rhyme in the third stanza. There's something about the occasional rhyme that's just so much more attractive, to me, than rhyming schemes.

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Marvelous sound and progression. I like how this stays natural and in one voice. Very well written. MD:77.

it's light reflecting tomorrow... its

I like this a lot. I really liked the format of the lines in the first three stanzas. I also loved the first line and the last stanza.. especially the reality really... that was interesting. The only thing is the second line seemed a bit cliche especially with the rest of the piece being so beautiful. But other than that really nicely done!

seriously amazing...i love it.and i also like your name 'thursdays and rain' haha. write on

Great first line. Lots of great imagery throughout.

Two little critiques (which you can ignore if you like because it still works fine):

1. It seems like there might have been better places to break up the lines in the second stanza.

2. Shouldn't it be "allusions to" instead of "allusions of"?

Anyway, great piece. You paint a picture.

I loved it. Very nice.

very pretty, lovely imagery and nice/interesting message. i think i'd prefer that it weren't all italicised, but that's just how i am. great work.