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Erma Buckles
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI am so scared for you! If this is really true you need to tell somebody and get help! I have a friend whose mother hit her all the time, and she told me, and I helped her, and now she is happily living with a foster family. This is a beautiful poem. I suggest that yyou spellcheck and grammar check it. It is really full of feeling, and I like it a lot!
haystar
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWoah, that's emotive. I really empathise with you on this one. I particularly like the ending.
A few spelling mistakes brought it down though. Fix those and it'll be great.
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