Reviews for Lets wish on stars

a silenced revolution 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abusei read it twice & -- favourites.
from beneath the bell jar 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseI really, really like the first one. 'busy wishing on themselves' is my favorite line. Very abstract and inspired. Sounds like something from a trippy Beatles song. The second one is really interesting. A concept I've never read before. Love the metaphor. I don't see how the two stanzas go together in the third one, but I quite like the second stanza. 'Windows in my eyes' is an interesting idea. Block out what you don't want to see.
eville 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abusei absolutely adore this. =]
josh-u-rawr 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant, loved how it was split into three parts! Nice work, fa line was, "Redemption has put a keep-out sign on her front door" Keep it up!