Like it. Maybe one day we'll be hearing it on the radio...couple of typos. But nothing a re-reading won't fix.

I like this, though I had to make up my own generic tune as I read this.

The only typo I saw was in 'Your telling me to not to leave', where it should be you're instead of 'your'. Also, I think the line 'This seems to me all just surreal' might be worded better. Maybe 'To me all this just seems surreal' or something like that.

Other than that, nice job. (: