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| kioreo 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abusezomg so cute!! Write more please! |
| under the bed 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAww he's so cute and self-conscious. ^_^ |
| Devil's Playground 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAwh! I thought this was great. And so cute! I love it. I think you could definitely make this into a longer story if you wanted to. |
| gummybaby 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI think it's adorable. very cute, so there. I veto your opinion. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was excellent! It's very descriptive. you could develop this and put it into a yaio story. |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't see what's so unattractive about it. I think it's very cute. Similar to when a boy and a girl first kiss except this is with two boys. And for some reason Mathew came off kind of creepy to me. Maybe it was the way he kept approaching Dylan and how he lied about never having a first kiss and practically seducing him. But that's just me. |