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LilLaTLuv
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseHey!

Interesting. There was too much going on, everything overwhelming her, and then...nothing. Nothing as in death? Or nothing as in she passed out?

Anyway, pretty cool poem. It describes something I can DEFINITELY commiserate with. I've felt this way too many times for comfort!

KEEP WRITING!

Luv ya,
Tashi :)
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