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| Ygg 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseVery refreshing, uplifting imagery which fits the time of the year! Love the image of "vertical paths".. it's unusual but certainly adds to the dynamics of the poem. Excellent work! |
| Lilium amoenum 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery =) |
| right2reality 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved the imagery in this and I think it helped make your haiku flow very well. I always love poems that capture a picture so beautifully, like how a good photograph ensnares a memory. Anyways, keep up the good work! -right2reality |
| MR.SEAN 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThat is really awsome! I love how the image flows through all three lines its like they're connected but not all at the same time! I like this very much! |