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| Em Wolf 2008-08-11 ch 21, | abuseAwesome update. I don't know why, but I love the idea of Cornelia and Gabriel. Hm, I wonder if she will come clean about Severienus and the pact she made with him... As always, keep up the mag work! |
| joelledrees 2008-08-10 ch 21, anon. | abuseYAY! A new chapter! I have been waiting and waiting and waiting, lol. Once again, brilliant, dahling! |
| nefarious nature 2008-08-10 ch 21, | abuseI was wondering what was wrong since you hadn't updated in a while. Glad to know that it was nothing serious, just a computer malfunction. Hope it get's fixed soon. Lovely chapter. I just can't seem to get enough of Hendrik and Cornelia. I personally blame my dirty little mind. But it's also your fault for being such an exquisite writer. Poor Cornelia. Now she's got to go steal some chalice for that creepy sorcerer dude. I wonder if she's gonna have to use her feminine wiles again to get her way this time? Anyways, au revoir! |
| nefarious nature 2008-06-28 ch 20, | abuseSo Severienus finally shows up. I wonder what that slimy-snake guy wants. Hopefully, just a nice cup of tea with the gang. |
| nefarious nature 2008-06-28 ch 17, | abusePoor Keagan, but I completely forgot about him after reading chapter 19. I mean wow...holy moley...hot stuff! You really weren't lying when you told me that a scene between Hendrik and Cornelia was coming up. And boy, you didn't fail to deliver either! Domo arigato Mr. Roboto! |
| nefarious nature 2008-06-28 ch 16, | abuse...and thanks for all of the new chapters! |
| nefarious nature 2008-06-28 ch 15, | abuseSorry for the long wait... |
| Em Wolf 2008-06-26 ch 20, | abuseCornelia just can't seem to catch a decent break. I feel for her. And now with several unexpected twists tied into her fate, her journey seems that much more longer. I can't wait what will come of her meeting with Sev. Keep up the mag work! |
| joelledrees 2008-06-25 ch 19, | abuseOk um, if I thought that last chapter was intense...boy howdy. :-P |
| joelledrees 2008-06-24 ch 18, anon. | abuseOh, that was intense! I am so glad you are continuing on with this story! I love it. Poor Keagan. I can't wait to see who they find next. I have to say, though, even though I picture Diego to be completely different, when he talks in my mind he always has Antonio Banderas' voice, lol. Keep writing! :-D |
| jess 2008-06-22 ch 17, anon. | abuseI think I first fell in love with your stories starting with your Peter Pan retelling. The dark feel, character developments, plot threads, the mix of action and fantasy, it's all done well! Congratulations for being one of the few authors that don't depend on the romance (or a thinly disguised romance) to drive your story. Also, I can't emphasize how much I love your characters, especially Cornelia. She doesn't have the "I have deep-rooted insecurities that will draw out the kind, loving side of a former rake" cliche that too many fictionpress stories have. Thanks for being creative and overly fluffy-romantic! |
| Em Wolf 2008-06-11 ch 15, | abuseHm, now I'm really starting to wonder what happened in Cornelia's past, especially with regard to Ambrose. I love how you just give us little snippets at a time instead of an entire chapter dedicated to a flashback, though the suspense is killing me. And will Gabriel ever recover his sight fully? And if so I wonder how that will change the dynamic between he and Cornelia. All in all, good stuff as usual. Can't wait for the next update! |
| nefarious nature 2008-06-04 ch 14, | abusePoor Keagan, how sad. Well I guess that Cornelia can keep her harem of men without any interference from a countess. I was a little disappointed with Cornelia's reaction to Hendrik's transformation. I guess that I was hoping for a fight that led to other, more pleasant, activities. But that is just wishful thinking on my part. Oh, and how come Cornelia didn't react to him as being a marked one. Does she have to make skin to skin contact? Anyway, loved the long chapter, can't wait till the new one comes out. Until next time! |
| Tim 2008-06-03 ch 13, anon. | abuseUmm it may just be me but wasn't Bel the name of the chick in Beauty and the Beast, not cornelia?? |
| Renzi 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuseWow. I've been gone for so long and there was like four chapters to read! Very good, I was amazed at your creativity with the lastest monsters. And I can't help shipping Gabriel and Cornelia, so I liked the whole kiss scene... yeah. Fav character? The first answer that popped into my head was Gabriel, but then I think that I like Diego too, so I'm not sure, probably Gabriel... there's just something about him that makes me want to hold him... Wow that sounded lame, but yeah. That's ok. Can't wait to read more! |