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| KalliopeStarmist 2008-07-29 ch 18,  | abuseThis is my favorite chapter so far. Just so ya know. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-06-17 ch 16, | abuseDr Pepper isn't a senior citizen drink, is it? I mean, he could be drinking Dr. Topper. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-06-17 ch 15, | abuseHaha, nice... I love how everything is normal and bitchy except that there are zombies. |
| Sasquatch 2008-05-06 ch 14, | abuseThis fic is weird and amusing... I like it, keep up the god work ^ ^; |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-05-05 ch 14, | abuseVery nice excuses, George. (By the way, there are a couple of typos in your updates... just a few pronouns you left out and stuff... if you ever feel like fixing them.) (No, I don't remember where they are. I'm not THAT good a friend.) |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-05-05 ch 13, | abuseThis chapter is surreal, depraved, disgusting, and hilarious. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-05-05 ch 12, | abuseWow, I wish I had enough white-trash friends and a drunken mother to have a funeral this awesome. Well, as usual, good job capturing this kind of scene; the awkward kid who doesn't know anyone there and got ditched by the guy who brought him, the drunken teens trying to cope, the ** fight, the catching-up, ect, ect. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-24 ch 11, | abuseNice conversation for a funeral; second-guessing people sexualities. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-24 ch 10, | abuseWow, this was pretty dark. Poor Betty. One minute all her problems just involve giant leeches, and the next she's got serious ** going down. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-24 ch 9, | abuseHaha, ah, obnoxious underage girls are the worst! |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-23 ch 8, | abuseOh, Toby! That's so sad... in a mildly comical way. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-23 ch 7, | abuseAH! I love the Ick tree and little Cora who doesn't know what's going on... she's six. Is there any chance that Cora, Naomi, and the Ick Tree will return in future chapters? |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-23 ch 6, | abuseWhat sense of the word "take" does Toby mean, by the by? I like the way you flesh out characters with weird little ancedotes like this quite a lot. It's one of my favorite things about your writing. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-23 ch 5, | abuseHaha, I like George and Toby and their weird sex lives. |
| KalliopeStarmist 2008-04-23 ch 4, | abuseXD YES! More Betty and her giant leech mixed with Communisim and cocain! This story has everything! |