|Reviews for God's Umbrella|
| Fractured Illusion 10/19/08 . chapter 1
"existence of god"
- Since you seem to talk of one god, then I think you spell it God. I dont know for sure though
"and their was nothing more"
"His finally resting place"
"but it’s origins were a mystery."
"The umbrella had appeared out of nowhere into nowhere."
- Hah I like this line. Interesting way to see it :)
Although this comes off more as humor, it's still a nice piece. I think we've all caught a lucky break like that so we can relate :)
- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link on my profile).
| stardustfaery 4/21/08 . chapter 1
:)wow. That was an adorable story. Amazing what an umbrella can do? I thought you captured a fuzzy warm feeling very well.
| Mom 3/18/08 . chapter 1
Very funny ending. (You hurt my sore laughing muscles!) I really like this one, though you need to proofread it again. Lots of typos sweety.