 Fractured Illusion 2008-10-19 . chapter 1"existence of god"
- Since you seem to talk of one god, then I think you spell it God. I dont know for sure though
"and their was nothing more"
- there
"His finally resting place"
- final
"but it’s origins were a mystery."
- its
"The umbrella had appeared out of nowhere into nowhere."
- Hah I like this line. Interesting way to see it :)
Although this comes off more as humor, it's still a nice piece. I think we've all caught a lucky break like that so we can relate :)
- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link on my profile). |