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| EyesEmphatic 2008-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseGreat ending! |
| kloun doll 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusewell, everyone deserves a second chance, nice song. |
| lonely silhouette 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseIt was very straight forward, and I didn't get much out of it. Rather repetitive, in my opinion, to the point where it becomes boring, but it still is a wonderful poem and has a lot of potential :) |
| Zonne 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseVery clever I like the ending |