 Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-01 . chapter 1lovely haiku |
 Moondog Dozier 2008-03-21 . chapter 1Excellent intensity in the tone for as compressed a space as a haiku. This bursts with emotion. Great write. |
 CO2 2008-03-21 . chapter 1Wow! Amazing haiku. |
 Jesusfreak43091 2008-03-20 . chapter 1love it!
in a way it brings back memories... |
 Faith Adeline 2008-03-18 . chapter 1great piece, it's strong.
Faith |
 a silenced revolution 2008-03-18 . chapter 1good description, nice haiku. |
 scarlet stars 2008-03-18 . chapter 1Simple, but very truthful and well stated. |
 ten pts above average 2008-03-18 . chapter 1makes me think... |
 Zonne 2008-03-18 . chapter 1That's excellent |