Wow. Totally new storytelling! I can almost hear Kristen Bell[the voice of GG]'s voice narrating this chappie. And I've noticed an error:

Where the girls finally have an excuse to *where next to nothing.

Should have been wear, right?

Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this story. :)

Hanban

Only one question ... What about 'this ones's for you'??

Isnt that being finished?:(

The style is interesting, which makes me want to read it; however, the introduction bit seems a little...unpolished, amateur. Maybe that's just an affect of the conversational tone? I do like the idea of using initials. Is this your own invention, or borrowed from Gossip Girl? (I'm unfamiliar with the show)
I would definitely read it if you continued.
-SA

love it LOL want to read more! x

Girrl u know what I'm sayin' .. this chick's got it going on. U should so totally like do this thang ...

Btw how's things? Misses and kisses u x