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| VesperK 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseOnly one question ... What about 'this ones's for you'?? Isnt that being finished?:( |
| S. Elizabeth Arouet 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThe style is interesting, which makes me want to read it; however, the introduction bit seems a little...unpolished, amateur. Maybe that's just an affect of the conversational tone? I do like the idea of using initials. Is this your own invention, or borrowed from Gossip Girl? (I'm unfamiliar with the show) I would definitely read it if you continued. -SA |
| sazaraz 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it LOL want to read more! x |
| EquilibriCal 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseGirrl u know what I'm sayin' .. this chick's got it going on. U should so totally like do this thang ... Btw how's things? Misses and kisses u x |