The bird looking at the others from below-that imagery is heartbreaking. And the one who cries too-that compassion isn't found in our world much anymore. You show one brief moment of humanity so quietly. Lovely.

McKinley

Well, I like it! I'm not sure how I feel about the total change of attitude in the last verse from the rest of the poem, but otherwise it's great. Good job!

Love, Gemma