Oh my. I can't beleive this. I've been a huge fan of your's ever since I started reading your stories many years ago and come back here every now and then to re-read your old stuff but somehow I havent noticed that you've returned! Fei, you have just made my day!

Okay, onto the story. I really like it so far. I can definatly see a lot of differences between this and your old work and frankly, it's a nice change of pace. So far I really like your main character. She's extremly real and very beleivable, she's got a lot of flaws but she's okay with it, something you really don't see much in high school kids. I don't have much to say about Aiden or Leon since we haven't really gotten a chance to see their characters but I can tell you that I really like Alex.

There's really not a whole lot of critique here as this is just the opening chapter and no plot is really discussed but I did enjoy this first installment and think you've got some interesting characters to work with.

The only thing I caught were a few typos. Little things that spell check wont catch and they don't take away from the story at all. Just thought I'd let you know.

Anyways, I'm so happy you returned! You are by far my favorite author ever on FP and it makes me so happy to see that you havent quit the site completely. I can't wait for you to update!

First of all, I was completely delighted and shocked to see that you had updated. You have the potential to become a really great writer, and I've missed seeing your work.

As far as this story, I'm not quite sure where you're headed, but you've created believable characters so far. I love that they're geeks (probably because I'm one .__.), 'cause I don't think there are enough geek!girl stories around. ^^ Your writing is fluid and very easy to follow, though not over-simplified. (Lol, did that make any sense?)

Anyway, I'm glad to see that you've picked up the pen again (or rather, keyboard). I miss your slash, but I'll give anything a shot.

~M