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SaiMero 2008-12-01 . chapter 27
Don't worry about not getting reviews. Not everyone who reads reviews^^ Most everyone I know has you on their favorites.
remembrance.of.u-4ever.farewel 2008-06-05 . chapter 34
short, sweet. i like it. it was really good though for next time i think u should write longer chapters. but i loved it.
Ruff 2008-06-05 . chapter 34
This last chapter had me laughing and smiling-HandMeDown
i mean, just picturing Xandro in one of his mother's night gowns is hilarious lol
Sing With The Elevator Music 2008-06-01 . chapter 34
haha cute. the bit about the storm was a bit cliche but that's easily fixed with what else? extra description of course:) what else would i say? lol i liked the transvestite bit :) how'd georgiana get back? she disappeared remember?

SWEM

sorry i was so late in my reviews.
LilionTheUrbanFairy 2008-06-01 . chapter 34
Aw! that´sjus so cute and wel happy ending like, but also a surprise cuzI always toutght that he would hide in some were another night gawn, lol but he wearing it was terribleb cute! by the way don't knowhow happy I was reading this, it realy cheered me up, I'm living alone for first time,but this week i had been terribe sick with the flu, and my mom and dad came to visit utthey left this morning and I was crying thiking That I really wanted to go back with them and live with them and my twin sister again but now I feel better, lol is so hard to be grow up! thats why I still love fair tales! tank you very much!
Kait 2008-05-31 . chapter 34
My mouth literally dropped open when I finished reading the final chapter. I was so not expecting that ending but I liked it nonetheless. I’m just glad that Kathiette and Xando can still be together. =] I enjoyed reading that.
Mariam 2008-05-31 . chapter 34
It's done...I'm so sad now!! What a great that story that was! I already miss it!! Great job on it from the beginning to the end!! Oh the end!! Amazing!!
stargazerlost 2008-05-31 . chapter 34
hahahaha Xandro in a dress hahaha that totally cracks me up. Aw, he's just so sweet to follow her when she couldn't return to him. A happy ending! Woot! hahha I love the way Cee freaked out about seeing him in a dress, especially since he's a stranger to her. I wonder how he's going to survive in the modern world, especially with him being so polite and all. haha Aw, now Kat doesn't have to be depressed for the rest of her life and she doesn't have to say goodbye. You know, thinking back on it, the Tanya-Mr. Petes thing is kinda gross but really sweet in its own way. Congrats on finishing your story! It was really good and really sweet.
Mariam 2008-05-30 . chapter 33
OH!! This is it! It's getting me so excited!! I hope Xandro comes back in the picture son!
Great job!!
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 6
I like the longer lengeth. they seem cute together. cinderella is a great addition to the chaoter too. =]
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 5
aww. he sounds cuter by the minute. I hope they do get married. the whole 'you will be noble' sounds promising. =]
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 4
Haha. I love the'our' bedroom part. I don't quite get why she is mad and storms out of the room. and I don't quite understand why godly handsom man doesnt have kids.
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 3
I wonder what she said... Nice cliffhanger. =]
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 2
interesting chapter. it was funny again. and the ending to the chapter seemed a bit abrupt again too...nice work though
Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 . chapter 1
I like this chapter. It is very fun. The ending is a bit dramatic though. =]
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