I love this poem; especially the ending. Good work :)

god i know that feeling. you can save some people in an instant, but others you just watch and feel helpless. really awesome poem. loved it.
"don’t expect to

Change you

But know I say "
i think that 'know' should be a 'now'. it makes more sense that way. this poem sort of felt like a song even though it wasn't written like a song. great job.

Really deap. I liked it.

This piece is carried well by your words and your lack of an explanation - which sometimes make the best poems. This was really interesting to read, the rhythm being so broken in places made it even better.

--Track8.