This sounds interesting so far... Definately going to continue reading this! I can't believe you've gotten only four reviews! This story deserves tons of them. ^-^

I can tell you have this story well thought out and the names are so original. I really like Atreyu's name. It looks and sounds like a good name. Tresca is a neat name too! Lol! Her name just seems to fit her so well, for some reason. So does Atreyu's for that matter. I don't know why, but they just seem to match up with their personalities.

This is definitely interesting so far. I like your writing style, too!

Great Story! ♥

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Wow! I just finished reading the update you did for With Sword in Hand. The duel and dying scene were very realisitc without being gory for the sake of goriness. I felt like I could see the final breath, and with him speaking of Dakota in his last words, that was powerful.

I like that Odoka was looking around for the sword, like she wanted to take out Hylika right there on the spot (previous posting).

When you had Hylika bring Tegua back to life, I was so glad you didn't have him spring back up, all fired up and ready for battle. Very well done. And his resurrection was done at a price to Hylika, too. Now A Sword Drawn makes a lot more sense, and the reader can really pull these two stories together.

Good job!

This is an interesting story, very comic book-like. Sometimes I get lost in the dialog and am not sure whos talking, but over all you are doing well.