| Reviews for Symmetry |
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Myrtho 7/23/12 . chapter 9 it was a great story i love it congradualtion |
Zighana 8/8/11 . chapter 9A! I absolutely love this story! Well-written, great characters, and the pace was slow enough for the two lovebirds to progress accordingly. Cocaine? Quite the narcotic! I'm sorry, I absolutely LOVE this story!:D |
The Imagination Addict 10/6/10 . chapter 9I like the idea in ur story. I think one thing u need to work on is writing style. Ur a bit too blunt when it comes to the more serious issues and the characters’ dilemma. Completely understandable. Keep working at it, yeah, n maybe one day you can publish books with real issues :) |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 9You Can Definitely Tell A Story Well. I Didn't Want It To End. It's Like 9 Chapters Were A Tease. Excellent Character Development And I Liked The Smooth Rhythm Of The Piece. It Flowed With An Ease And A Fluidity That I Loved; Very Calm, Relatable, Realism. CONSIDER A SEQUEL ! :) I Think There Is So Much More Of Edison And Noelle To Experience. Thank You For The Perfect End To My Day :) ( I will definitely re read) |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 8Are There Really Girls Like Tiffany? Man! Too Bad. Good For Edison. |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 7I Knew You Wouldn't Let Me Down! Leave The Tender Moment Alone. Episode Nicely Done. |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 6Dual Inner Struggle. Very Real. Did I Say I Was Really Caring About These Two? I Am. Will They Be Able To Be Each Others Strength? I Know You Know, But I'm On To Chapter 7 To Watch And See. |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 5OOH! Finally The Conflict! And You Didn't Make It A Forced Cliche. It"s Like I'm In The Diner Watching! |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 4There Is A Sweetness That Is Coming Through In A Really Genuine Way. Not "Chicky" But COMPLETELY BELIEVABLE. Can't Write More, RUNNING To Chapter 5! |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 3Oh My God! What's Going To Happen Now? This Is Getting So Good! Gotta Go Chapter 4's Waiting... |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 2Again...WOW! I Have To Say This Is Such A Great Time! I'm Aggressively Compelled Forward! taking my laptop with me to garage for my smoke... see you in Chapter 3... |
Siobhan - Imani 2/18/10 . chapter 1Can I Just Say... WOW! I Can't Wait for Chapter 2! |
Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2/9/10 . chapter 9Very sweet. Cute. Edison is messed up, and Noelle is very innocent and trying to be tough, and they are perfectly imperfect for each other. I love it. They would be one of those couple who last. |
Mascara is evil 4/25/09 . chapter 1no tatoos? how boring. I wonder what Edison's friends problem was. |
Booklover91 10/4/08 . chapter 1Hmm, this story sounds interesting, but I can't believe she doesn't like guys with tattoos! I LOVE them! Lol |