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Reviews For: A Love Triangle Is Like A Bad Car Crash
jrsparkus
2008-03-23
ch 1, 		abuseSWEET! it was awesome, my favorite part was
but this fog is just a shroud.
A shroud to cloud my mind
and I’m running out of time
while the blood is running down my face
my heart is beating to a faster pace

awesome work, again
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