One word... Aw! I loved it. Nice work, just the grammar stuff you mentioned.

Hi! Nice one. I liked it. I'm a bit confused with the beginning -- is this guy dead? Is that why she (I'm assuming it's a woman) says that she misses him even though he's with her?

Fav two lines: "If that's not perfect, then I don't want perfect" and "you sang like some sort of trout gasping for air." Imagery is great, and there's a real depth of emotion there.

Not sure I'm crazy about the title, actually. "Just a Love Letter" doesn't seem good enough for this piece; this is more than a mere love letter. It's a nice piece of flufftastic romance. ^^

~Therese

Thanks for the short letter which you have written; it's really nice I must say.

Since you have just mentioned about this being an original copy of your writing, I shall spare you from those mistakes! XD

Simple, but yet, romantic and sweet. Well done, precisely, being ourselves is what most important in the earth! haha...

Anyway, happy writing, and forgive me for leaving you such a short comment.