You did a very good job at ilustrating this piece.

Nice work.

I really liked this, and I can sympathize with you because I know this feeling.

I suppose it's hard for one to move on when things change, but really the best thing to do is forget... Remembering only hurts.

modern day cousin it. haha. but yeah i can definitely relate. its weird how at first that nostalgia makes you smile because you remember good times but then you realize that you no longer can share it with those friends and it makes you sad. nice poem friend. peace

This was very good. I hope you keep writing.

oo chilling. i liked it. question: is the person you're talking about dead and you just can't let go of the memory? or is it really some sort of possessive/abuse thing? either way it's a very good poem. i liked the metaphor of the cigarette.