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Reviews For: Shoot the Moon
Neon Chandelier 2009-08-04 . chapter 1
that's interesting. I liked it.
dangerouslies 2008-04-27 . chapter 1
Hi again,
I like this one but it's not really that funny, the idea is but the way you've expressed it isn't. I like your use of enjambement especially between the second and third stanzas;
"but wolves don't have wings. Only claws

Suddenly too short to reach the cord."
I think is gives emphasis to the contrast between having claws and having wings, as well as conveying the meaning of them being too short to release the parachute.
dagnerouslies, a fellow member of Reviewers Kingdom
theredone1223 2008-04-25 . chapter 1
OOH, suspense. But I'm just trying to figure out why the werewolf would be parachuting when it's a full moon and he/she/it knows what's going to happen when they turn into a werewolf at that time of month. But I liked it and I would be pleased if you wrote more stuff like this.

From,
Red of Reviewers Kingdom
Scorpia710 2008-03-20 . chapter 1
A parachuting werewolf, LOl, I love humor!
Hope the werewolf lands on his feet, I want to here more about him. Good job!
Scorpia
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