That was entertaining. It was cool that you decided to write in a way that it's just a bunch of jumbling that, in some odd way, makes sense. Oh, and I really like the ending about the cats. ^-^
~Besieged.Infection

That was the best poem that I have ever read in my entire short life. I couldn't help but laugh. I love the way that it end in "but I’ve got to feed the cats." That is the most perfect funniest ending ever. 'How I Will Die' needs no improvements what so ever in my point of view. That may just be me because I think everyone that everyone writes is amazing. One thing I hate to say this but so not leave it setting any ware because some people might take it a little to seriously if they see it laying around. (Just saying). Once again this poem was really good. Hope to read more things like this.

Karen
Co-Founder of the Reviewers Kingdom

Hah! This was amazingly good reading. I sense a serious touch under the humorous layer and I really liked it. Very well done!

~Thomicas

Well, it seems like the narrator just can't make up his or her mind. Very nice. All the lines flowed well together. One critique: The poem seems more like a "When I will Die" rather than a "How I will Die" since it's never clearly mentioned "how" the narrator will die.

Hahaha, ah man, that was wonderful. It's just so ridiculous, but the sad thing is I can actually think of people who would say something like that. Great job!

Sounds like major procrastination to me ( I know I spelled that wrong) whoever your talking about doesn't seem too sure of herself or himself. A great poem I'm adding it to favorites