Reviews for Empty and Lost - FictionPress.com

Mystic and Masochistic 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, I simply love the bluntness of it. Don't have anything else to say, except, phenomenal! ~Isabel
simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI like this piece. The rhyming flows really well and I like all the questions you ask. I also like the second to last stanza a lot. The only thing is the first line. Let me down. I couldn't tell if you want physically to be let down or if it meant emotionally and either way Im not sure what that hasta do with the piece, thought maybe Im just missing something.
perpetual questions 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the flow, very rhythmic and effective. Good rhymes too, they don't seem too forced. Cool ending. I'd suggest putting a period at the end of "Under this frost" in the second stanza, since it's not a question and the next line isn't a continuation of it. Good job!
xxInsanityxx 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseI love this, i feel it flows very well! Keep up the good work ~xxInsanityxx