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| simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. The title was absolutely perfect and the piece was so sad, but really well written and truthful. The ending was especially perfect. The only thing is the first line of the second stanza seemed a bit long. Other than that really great job. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI like how simple you made things. You strip away all the excuses and reasons surrounding this - why they were sent to these camps in the first place, the war going on, etc. - and get to the stark, harsh bottom of them. Very well-written! Also, I was just wondering why you have the Holocaust as a recurring topic. =P Are you studying it now, or does it just interest you? |