Thats really good :) I like it.

This is good, I like it a lot. It can relate to lots of situations. Well done. Keep writing and always be positive!

~Anna~ ^_^

Nicely established.

You've a few mistakes here and there (including the title of this piece), but this doesn't take away from the reading. I like how you refer to gossip as a drug - in a way it is, now that I think about it.

I can feel the frustrated tone of this piece.