Lilith's Legacy indeed. It is evident you have done your research. She has been to so many places and mentioned in many parts of history. That Cain bit though, is that a bit of creativity on your end or did I miss something in my readings of Her? Either way, I can see her involvement in that incident. The ending was perfect; Lilith is the wind. Almost an oncoming storm. Your poetry is very pretty and well thought out.

Another lovely poem. You're an extemely good writer.

this is amazing. wonderful writing. i love the rhyming and how it flows. it's impossible to find anything wrong with it. terrific job.

Nicely written!

I had no trouble following this poem. I like the soft, 'old-fashioned' (if I can call it that) language you use here. My only problem was with the line 'And I did follow him in flight', because the 'did' juts out a little awkwardly. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine. I'd leave it as just 'followed'.

Overall, good work. (: