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| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseCool song. =P I like the chorus especially. 'Your feet they reek of dirt and grime/Talk about committing a horrific crime' made me smile. The rhyme and rhythm are very catchy! I can relate to this entirely, too! This reminded me especially of when I was on vacation, and all meals took place in this open, windowless hall. Needless to say, there were flies. =/ |