 Ecaterina Dracula 2008-09-11 . chapter 1that was a little peom! :D |
 miscellanea 2008-04-06 . chapter 1Faces Like Flowers...
That is amazing! I love you.
This poem is really pretty.
I read it like ten times. |
 simpleplan13 2008-03-27 . chapter 1really interesting similie... I like it a lot |
 RavenclawMoose 2008-03-24 . chapter 1I really like this Haiku. It reminds me of the way I see people in a crowd, how they all sort of blend into each other and flow past, making individuals nearly impossible to distinguish. Except, this is much prettier.
~RM |
 Marner1 2008-03-22 . chapter 1Awsome Haiku. Much better than anything I could have come up with. Great job. ^_^ |
 Kar-zid 2008-03-21 . chapter 1Great story! Mystical and meaningful! Excellently written Haiku. |
 Moondog Dozier 2008-03-21 . chapter 1Very mystical and thought provoking. Well written haiku. |
 Illastic 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Very eloquent. |
 Shadows in the Fire 2008-03-19 . chapter 1I really like this poem--the meaning is so pretty. Only one thing--below is how the grammar should be:
Faces, like flowers
blowing in the wind. They come
and then they are gone.
See how I took the ; out (because it was misused) and made 'they come' merge with 'and'? It reads much better that way.
Anyways, very, very pretty poem. I love the imagery--faces coming before being wisked away :D
-Shadow |
 Leigh B. 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Beautiful execution through the Haiku form. |
 fatbird33 2008-03-18 . chapter 1hm i think that this is very true |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-18 . chapter 1Creepy!
This reminds me of ghosts and spirits; mischievous, dancing things from horror stories.
Nice phrased! |