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Ecaterina Dracula 2008-09-11 . chapter 1
that was a little peom! :D
miscellanea 2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Faces Like Flowers...

That is amazing! I love you.
This poem is really pretty.
I read it like ten times.
simpleplan13 2008-03-27 . chapter 1
really interesting similie... I like it a lot
RavenclawMoose 2008-03-24 . chapter 1
I really like this Haiku. It reminds me of the way I see people in a crowd, how they all sort of blend into each other and flow past, making individuals nearly impossible to distinguish. Except, this is much prettier.

~RM
Marner1 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Awsome Haiku. Much better than anything I could have come up with. Great job. ^_^
Kar-zid 2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Great story! Mystical and meaningful! Excellently written Haiku.
Moondog Dozier 2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Very mystical and thought provoking. Well written haiku.
Illastic 2008-03-19 . chapter 1
Very eloquent.
Shadows in the Fire 2008-03-19 . chapter 1
I really like this poem--the meaning is so pretty. Only one thing--below is how the grammar should be:

Faces, like flowers
blowing in the wind. They come
and then they are gone.

See how I took the ; out (because it was misused) and made 'they come' merge with 'and'? It reads much better that way.

Anyways, very, very pretty poem. I love the imagery--faces coming before being wisked away :D

-Shadow
Leigh B. 2008-03-19 . chapter 1
Beautiful execution through the Haiku form.
fatbird33 2008-03-18 . chapter 1
hm i think that this is very true
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-18 . chapter 1
Creepy!

This reminds me of ghosts and spirits; mischievous, dancing things from horror stories.

Nice phrased!
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