The honesty I felt from this piece surprised me. I like it a lot because I can relate to it too.

O...it's like falling in love with someone you know is bad for you. The bad boy. The idol. The one everyone wants.

Marvelous!

this is REALLy good. i like that it's in the time period that it's set in not in modern times, it gives it a good twist on the norm, and the ending was simply spectacular and surpising. well done