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| Falcon 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse(I don't wanna log in. Bite me.) First, ze SPAGs: "I'm sorry." (period inside the quotations) "placed *their by your/blindness." *there Yeah, so that was a failed attempt at corrections. Moving on, Amber. I am not really sure what you meant for this to be about (am I daft, or what?) but I just like the imagery in this a lot. Falcon |
| camouflage 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusedeep. i like it lots. write on my friend |
| Amethyst Leirda PhotoMaster 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThe words create a tone and mood that transcends the phrase "beautifully eerie." This is much darker than your usual work but very well done, none the less! |