this is a pretty awesome poem

i write in the car too (not driving of course, either)

:) actually, i usually will usually just get a passenger to write it for me

or i will record it into my cell phone

i really appreciate your world-views.

now, don't get me wrong. i don't entirely agree with them.

but i am really glad you have them

and that you can convey them so well in poetry.

this poem is really neat.

i really like the simplicity of its metaphors. it's v effective.

you aren't trying to make your reader learn something new,

just reminding them of things they already know.

it's almost list-like (or 'bullets' as the software programs may call it)

which i think is really fitting, too.

killer poem. keep doing it. -ty.