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| XsilentXescapeX 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was good i loved the summary =P i forgot what i was going to say...yeah im smart...lol ...hm oh i like the title is it perhaps a refrence to shakespeares play which is also titled alls well that ends well? or did that title just pop into your head? ~silent |
| vase the girl 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful, and really well written! For me, the whole poem just sticks out in my mind... not just one line. :] |
| from beneath the bell jar 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I like the surface topic of a captain going down with his ship. Very well-written and ironic. I'm still trying to determine the actual meaning of the poem: frustrated romance? Too proud to leave a failing relationship? I LOVE "this is it! cried the captain to the sinking ship" |
| Killer Syntax 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abusewow i really loved this piece, it is so...ironic (for lack of a more fitting description.) I'm adding this to my favs. Great job! |