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| Pinkamoo 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! Luckily, I don't have a pervy mind! I never thought anything of the sort! Adorable! I loved it when she was like YOU and then he's like ME? When she so totally played a part in all that :p |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery creative plot, pretty well-written, fantastic characters. Love, love, love. Would love to see some more chemistry/interaction before the kiss, however. Other than that, though, this was fantastic, and a fantastic addition to our c2 from Queen of Absolutely Everything. (: |
| SC Mac 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was cute. I really enjoyed it. I got the last line...after reading it twice.;) |
| RoseLife 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseAWW very adorable! nice work ^^ |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseCute :) -Aria |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abusebahahahah very cute ;) |
| artistic dreamer 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseahahaha, this is so cute and funny! i can't stop laughing! the last part after they had their super long makeout session was a bit confusing, but not because you wrote it weird, but just the logic, i couldn't quite follow what april was thinking, like it was april fool's day and then she thought sean was gonna do a prank and then all that stuff that she thought was going to happen...okay now i'm just confusing myself, but no worries, i still got your story, just the part where sean was trying to tell her he was joking and april kept thinking he was playing a prank on her. the plot is original i like it. keep writing one shots, this one was awesome! |
| GrannyP 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved this! My sister and I used to play practical jokes like that on each other all the time. I do miss those days! The best ones were always the simple ones... like the time I unrolled the toilet paper and then rolled it back up with a (very real-looking) fake spider tucked inside so that it popped out at her when she went to get some TP. Oh, memories. Anyway, very cute! |
| x3life 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute!! i love it =) |
| Lena Niccolas 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusethat was kind of adorable. And funny. |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute. Very well-written. I can honestly say I actually really enjoyed this, great work. :D |
| Qzz 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! so original and interesting. funny how their anniversary is on april fool's day. :) |