I didn't like this one as much as the others. It doesn't seem to flow quite as well. It's good, just a little bit choppy.

I like the ending few lines in particular.

This is really good, really true.

I like this line in particular: "I've got me right where I want me." In fact, I love this whole thing. Lurvely.

This was a very nice poem. I really liked the way that you wrote it out and how realistic is seemed as well.

C.S.

You have a very unique talent of writing poetry :) It's amazing and beautiful!
Like very metaphorical but so very realistic at the same time especially the second and fourth one.
Write another when you can.
CheddarPixie/Kate

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Did you honestly do this in one period?

This so beats my epic poem into the ground. XP

Every unrequited love/crush is in here. It's perfect.

boy can i relate to THIS. i don't really have any criticism for you...