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persephone in waiting
2008-03-19
ch 1,

abusethis is actually the first review i've sent to anyone in some time. i really like this poem, especially the last few lines or so:

"you’ll never/

get enough of the/

butterfly called/

high./

she flutters just/

ahead of you/

but you will/

never/

catch her./

you chase/

you crash/

you burn"

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