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| Double AA 2008-05-09 ch 2,  | abuseWonderful! It's finaly up! Now I can tell you what I think of it. It was very well written, I like the flow of it, I also like how you're telling a story using poetry. This is a fine peice of work, and I look foreward to reading what's more to come. Keep Writing! Double AA |
| TT-da-lamanite 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, thats different your telling a story, thru lines though not really, and its not really poetry because, well poetry is the soul seeking the outside world, and that manifests in everything you empty your soul into. Its different and I like different. So hope you write more. TT btw you always came to me as a person who liked happy endings. |